Brought To Her Knees by Dark Cloud

There is a very exclusive S&M club in Los Angeles that attracts a very rich and powerful clientele. It has no official name but is known affectionately as "The Sub Club". The members are all female Dommes and the only males allowed in are their submissives and slaves. Based in the ground floor of a little used hotel, once you have gained entrance you are treated to sight unseen by most people. It is open Friday, Saturday and Sunday every week and usually packed. This tale is about two of the most prominent dominatrix who were members at the club and who had a long running hatred of one another.

Mistress Elizabeth is nearly six feet tall , in her late thirties and has a very upright poise to herself that is explained by the fact that she was for over a decade an international supermodel. Born in England she has kept the very posh accent of the rich. With a slim figure, long legs and beautiful long dark hair she looks every bit a goddess to be worshipped. But her attitude and demeanour is every bit as ugly as her looks are nice. She is bad tempered, snaps at people and treats them like shit. Her small band of male and female subs love it but it is no act she saves for them and tends to treat everybody as just being there for her and had fallen out with many a person, in the club and outwith. A woman of substance she owns her own mansion in the richest area of the city and keeps five slaves with her. There is a distinct cruel streak to Elizabeth that she relishes unleashing on her slaves.

Mistress Teri is much shorter as 5'5", has cropped dark hair and is roughly the same age as Elizabeth. She is very generously proportioned without being fat as she has a huge pair of tits ( which are accentuated by the tight, revealing tops and outfits she wears to the club ). Texas born and raised Teri is a much nicer person than Elizabeth and although very serious, is into S & M as an enjoyable mutual hobby, having only subs she gets on with and she is never too rough on them. She is also extremely well off having collected a multi-million dollar pay-off when her rich husband passed away.

Elizabeth had fallen foul of many of the club's Mistresses during her three years as a member, her snotty attitude getting her into rows that swiftly turned personal. However, her clash with the normally affable (to the other Dommes) Teri was the stuff of legend. Teri had observed Elizabeth whipping a female sub in the club with an evil vigour and had remarked upon it to Elizabeth. She had told Teri in no uncertain terms where she could stick her advice and had taken it very personally. Indeed Elizabeth made it her goal to wind Teri up and to that end she set about stealing one of Teri's subs from her, a cute young student, new to the lifestyle, Hilary. Hilary was a really sweet young blonde thing and Teri enjoyed dominating her and breaking her into things gently.

Not surprisingly given her resources and vindictiveness, Elizabeth succeeded in persuading Hilary to leave Teri and become her slave girl. As soon as she had Teri remonstrated with her and the club but could do nothing as Hilary did it of her own free will and was slowly being controlled by the English Mistress until she was totally subservient to her. And then Elizabeth took pleasure in dominating and humiliating Hilary in front of everybody (especially Teri) in as hard and cruel a manner as possible.

From that moment on their dislike of each other grew into hatred and went from ignoring each other to implied insults to face to face name calling. The other members of the club were aware of this animosity and tried to stay clear but were not happy with it. Things finally turned physical one Saturday night when both Elizabeth and Teri were in close proximity and while using a whip on a submissive Elizabeth 'accidentally' managed to nick Teri's shoulder. Teri reacted angrily and confronted the taller Mistress.

"You did that on purpose you Bitch!"

"I did not! And kindly lower your voice. I don't want anyone thinking I associate with common trash like you!"

At that insult Teri went right up to Elizabeth , nose to chin , to which Elizabeth contemptuously shoved Teri away . Teri got back up and angrily grabbed Liz by the throat when three other Mistresses broke it up. Before they left that night they were both summoned to come to the club alone the next day, an hour before it was due to open.

The owner of the club was Mistress Demi, she was in her early forties, had long dark hair and a fantastic body for her age. Everybody, including Elizabeth, listened when Mistress Demi spoke. She had a reputation as a very harsh dominatrix in her own right, quite the inventive sadist and quite often came up with new ideas and themes for the club. That afternoon both Teri and Elizabeth stood in their normal clothes across the desk from a seated Mistress Demi.

"What am I to do? You are both such good members of the club; you pay your fees and are on the whole the type of member I want her but this situation is not acceptable. I received several complaints last night as to your behaviour and it's not the first time. I believe I should ban the pair of you". At this both women looked downcast as they knew this was the most exclusive club of its type and if word got out they had been banished from it they would e persona-non-grata at many of the other fetish clubs in the city.

"However, I've thought about it and have come to a solution that if you two agree to will see you both stay on at the club and resolve your differences. Are you interested?" They both nodded their heads.

"Good. In two weeks time I shall have a wrestling ring erected in the centre of the club's main hall. You two will fight each other in it. It would be a no holds barred fight and I would referee. I'm sure it would create a special atmosphere for the club. The loser would be determined by submission to the winner. They would actually have to say 'I submit'. The loser would then have to be totally submissive to the winner for one week, during which the winner could do what they wished with the loser. Then one week to the night of the fight the winner would carry out a public demonstration of the others submission in front of all the other Mistresses and subs. That's it, take it or leave it, but let me know by Monday because I want at least a week to promote the event.

Both Elizabeth and Teri had reservations but agreed to the fight. Mainly because they didn't want to leave the club but also the opportunity to have their hated rival serve them was too good an opportunity to miss - despite the implications of losing. There is nothing so degrading or humiliating than a Dominatrix or Mistress being brought to her knees by another.

Cut to the night of the fight and the club is buzzing like never before. Both Elizabeth and Teri are such strong and well known characters that almost everyone knows them. Mistress Demi has made everyone aware of the fight and its stipulations and forfeits. For many this will be the highlight of the year, most wanting to see Elizabeth get her comeuppance but a fair number of deviants also hopeful of seeing the cute Teri publicly humbled. Whatever, the prospect of seeing one of the clubs strictest Mistress having to obey a hated rival was big box office and Mistress Demi charged high prices for ringside tickets. Both combatants had been in intensive training with trainers but neither was a fighter so this would be a clash of amateurs and a test of how much they wanted to win, what they were willing to do and how desperately they did not want to use.

The night came, the crowd (nearly all fellow Dommes , though a few subs were permitted to watch, including Elizabeth and Teri's own subs) were packed into their seats and noisy when music blared and into the rind stepped Mistress Demi to load applause. She was wearing a rubber white and black striped top that barely contained her surgically enhanced breasts and the tiniest, tightest pair of black rubber shorts imaginable. She grabbed the microphone to announce the contest.

"Dommes and Subs. Welcome to the club, tonight you are privileged to watch as two members will settle their differences in this very ring in a fight to the finish. There are no rules and tonight one of these proud Dominatrix's will be forced to submit to the other and become their sub for one whole week"

The crowd cheered this announcement and then the two fighters came to the ring. Teri came to the ring first clad in a purple string bikini. She wasn't happy with the outfit (or rather lack of it!) but Mistress Demi had insisted that both she and Elizabeth would wear what they were told to maximise the audience's amusement. Teri had very big, fleshy tits and the flimsy fabric of the bikini top seemed to strain badly under their weight. The bottoms, meanwhile, really curved up and into her ample ass so that, viewed from behind it appeared she had none on. The faintly ridiculous sight was completed by the high heeled, matching purple shoes she wore and tottered to the ring on. Elizabeth was dressed in an identical fashion, only she was bedecked in a fiery scarlet colour and the skimpy outfit fitted her taut body much better. They stood staring daggers at one another as Demi introduced them and prepared them for battle. Once she finished speaking she nodded to her assistant at ringside who sounded a bell to begin the contest.

They circled each other tentatively, neither wishing to strike first in case the made a mistake. Both ladies had their hands up in an aggressive stance their nails clawed and ready to strike. Never taking her eyes of Elizabeth, Teri was slightly disheartened to see that her opponent had obviously grown her fingernails and deliberately sharpened them to points. Liz noticed her enemy's gaze and mockingly clawed at the air and snarled," I am going to rip you up Bitch!"

The remark seemed to snap the hypnotic lull that both had fallen into and they simultaneously launched themselves at each other as the crowd roared them on and Demi stepped back with a satisfied smirk.
Elizabeth led hands first and directed them straight at Teri's face. Teri reached up and grabbed both of her attacker's wrists and held them tight, forcing them away from her despite Elizabeth's definite reach advantage. As they tussled, Teri tried to kick Elizabeth but she anticipated that move and managed to hook her long leg around Teri's kicking one and over balanced her so they both fell to the hard mat, Teri landing hard on her back.

Teri lay on her back trying desperately to keep Elizabeth's claws away from her face but was losing the battle as the taller woman not only had longer arms but greater leverage being on top of her rival. Teri tried frantically to protect her face which made her all the more vulnerable when Elizabeth quickly withdrew her hands and balled them up and slammed them into Teri's stomach. Teri clutched at her gut only for Elizabeth to rake her sharp nails across her cheek leaving three scores of red on the smaller woman's face. A flurry of blows followed from both women and they somehow made it back to their feet, again circling each other, Elizabeth definitely drawing first blood.

This seemed to give Elizabeth confidence and she shot in again to try and punch Teri's stomach but was surprised when the move was avoided and Teri managed to get behind Elizabeth and have a tight grip from behind of her opponent. As Elizabeth threw elbows back, trying to dislodge her rivals grip Teri suddenly let go and ripped off Elizabeth's bikini top, exposing her pert breasts to the cheering crowd. As soon as Teri had found out what costumes Mistress Demi was making them wear she had swore to herself that at the earliest opportunity she would embarrass that stuck up bitch by stripping her nude in front of everyone.

Teri flung the top into the crowd and when Elizabeth turned angrily towards her Teri fastened her nails into the sticking out nipples of her rival, simultaneously driving her nails into the breast flesh and twisting hard in a clockwise direction. Elizabeth's face contorted in obvious pain and she squealed so Teri, encouraged, twisted harder thinking it could be just that easy. I t wasn't going to be as Liz slapped Teri with all her might, catching her flush on her right ear. The blow was a vicious one and not only did it sting badly but her head rung and her equilibrium went a bit and she let go of Elizabeth's tits and wobbled back against the ropes.

Elizabeth quickly followed up her brief advantage and delivered another equally vicious open hand slap to the same ear, sending Teri to the canvas, unable to keep her feet. Elizabeth wasted little time in stamping on her downed foe with her high heels, connecting a number of times with her thigh and stomach.

"Let's fucking see how you like that, Bitch", snarled Elizabeth, her posh exterior forgotten.

She rolled the still recovering Teri over onto her front and untied Teri's purple bikini top and threw it into the crowd. She then rolled Teri over revealing her huge breasts to much hollering from the audience. Liz then slid Teri's arms under her body and planed herself down on top of her foe pinning her to the ground, her chest sticking up unprotected.

Teri's head cleared just as Elizabeth's sharp fingernails began to circle the soft flesh of her breasts. She struggled but could do little but give a small whimper as the nasty Englishwoman stabbed her claws into the skin and sunk the nails in as deep as she could and began to pull and knead them with sadistic enthusiasm and vigour, eliciting howls from the short Texan. Elizabeth clawed them mercilessly, leaving a mess of red stripes over her mammoth mammaries. Then she started on Teri's actual nipples, sinking thumb and forefinger nails into them and pulling them up as hard as she could while nipping her nails together through the skin. A minute of this treatment saw tears form in Teri's eyes and Demi stood over her, a microphone in hand and asked "Do you submit?"

"Noooooooo!" was the answer.

Elizabeth coldly increased the pressure of her fingers until even they hurt but Teri despite the pain would not submit. Elizabeth eventually released her grip on Teri's nipples and delivered another slap to her face and got to her feet, a new form of punishment in mind. She rolled her stunned opponent onto her front but made sure her damaged left nipple was peeking out to the side and positioned the tip of her heel over it then stood down on it - eliciting a wooo from the crowd and an agonised scream from Teri.

Again Demi stooped to the downed fighter and asked if she gave up and again, through the pain she rejected the question. Elizabeth was not frustrated though and moved around intent on doing the same to Teri's other nipple. However, just seconds before stamping down on her victim, Teri managed to hook her hand around Elizabeth's ankle and overbalance her, sending her neck first onto the second rope. She fell forwards and the rope caught her right under her chin, the thick fabric ramming into her throat and sending her spinning to the mat gasping for breath.

Teri got to her feet, seeing this opportunity to get back into the fight, and, ignoring the burning pain that shot across her breasts made her way over to her downed foe. Liz's legs were in perfect position for Teri to hold apart then drop her knee right into her crotch, which she did, then did again and a third time until now it was Liz howling in pain. Teri then stamped her high heels into that area until Elizabeth gave a blood curdling scream and as she recovered Teri ripped her opponents bottoms and shoes off so the English Mistress lay completely nude on the canvas.

Teri held the red panties up for the crowd to see and was about to throw them away when she stopped and rammed them into Elizabeth's gasping mouth. Pushing them as far down her gullet as she could manage. In this state of nakedness Teri ( and the spectators a ringside ) could now see that Elizabeth did not fully shave her pussy as a neatly trimmed bush of dark hair was clearly evident. With a smile on her face Teri plunged her fingers into the pubic hair and began to rip it out viciously, tossing the thin black hairs into Elizabeth's protesting face once they had been torn out. Having plucked her opponent's pussy nearly bald Teri stood up, held Elizabeth's legs wide apart and jumped up to drive her knee once more into her injured crotch. The impact was huge and Elizabeth cried out, then cried more as Teri left her knee in there and ground it in evilly. And when Demi asked if she wanted to submit she could barely shake her head no.

Elizabeth's throat was obviously still troubling her so Teri decided to attack that next and manoeuvred her onto her front, sat on her back, cupped her hands under Elizabeth's chin and hauled backwards in powerful camel clutch-like manoeuvre. She wrenched back with all her might, planting her feet firmly on the mat. Elizabeth summoned what strength she had and hooked her arms around Teri's standing legs and somehow pulled herself up so that Teri hung on her back and before the short woman could adjust Elizabeth overbalanced and the two of them tumbled hard through the ropes and crashed to the floor.

Both Mistresses lay on the hard floor breathing hard. They had both suffered in the landing, Teri's back had smacked badly against the edge of the ring on the way down, while Elizabeth had smacked onto the floor face-first with little protection. Mistress Demi stood over both as they recovered, there would be no count outs here.

Teri made it to her feet first, really feeling the ache in her back, nonetheless she determinedly stooped to pick up a cable that was lighting the ring from the ground and just as Elizabeth was gingerly picking herself up she wound it around her neck and pulled it tight. Elizabeth clawed at Teri's hands awkwardly, trying to pry them off, her nails digging into Teri's skin. But Teri held firm and the crowd urged her on. They were staggering near a corner of the ring and Liz, her consciousness fading spied the metal steps that led up to the ring and in one desperate movement spun around and lunged backwards , forcing the small of Teri's back right into the metal with a sickening thud.

Teri released the cable immediately and felt for her back, it was in agony. Elizabeth staggered about ringside, her hands grasping onto the side of the ring for balance as she pulled the loose cable from her neck, worried that Teri cold strike again at any moment. But she didn't, she lay in pain, her wounded back her only thought for the moment. Seeing this Elizabeth seized up the cable, bent it over a couple of times and, like a whip, lashed it against Teri's still sore breasts. She whipped time and time again, leaving angry red stripes across her front. Teri rolled over to avoid this treatment but that only meant that Elizabeth lashed her injured back (and from her injured yelps it was obviously hurt). Finally Elizabeth halted the beating and she picked Teri up by her hair and smashed her head into the ring steps a couple of times before rolling her back into the ring.

Teri was a like a rag doll in the ring and Elizabeth slapped her about contemptuously before throwing her into the corner of the ring and charging in to deliver a foot to her gut. But Teri's weakened state worked in her favour as as soon as she hit the corner she slumped out of it and Liz's charge missed and she ended up slamming her own crotch into the metal nut that held the ropes in the corner.

As Elizabeth dangled there Teri fell over onto her side, knowing that she had to get up again but physically unable to do it quickly. It was at this point with the focus on the struggling Teri that Demi pulled something from her shorts and slyly slipped it onto Elizabeth's hand. It was a flesh coloured, hard plastic knuckle duster. Quickly the ref turned with a smile on her face, to observe Teri's pushing herself up vertical. Teri moved over to unhook Liz and deliver a move when Liz swung round and caught Teri flush on the jaw with the weapon. Seeming to the crowd like a knock out punch that felled Teri like a tree.

Why the subterfuge by Mistress Teri? Three reasons. One, Demi had heard rumblings about a proposed new club in the city that Mistress Teri might be heavily involved with. Two, Mistress Demi had always had a real sadistic streak to her that clashed somewhat with Teri's more reasonable attitude. Three, Mistress Elizabeth was told by Demi that for $10,000 she would help her win.

Elizabeth struggled out of the ropes and grinned at her downed opponent. Teri gave a low moan but other than that had no signs of life. Conscious of her huge advantage Elizabeth moved to broaden it. She rolled Teri over onto her front then knelt on her shoulders facing Teri's ass. Then with a shocking fierceness Elizabeth hammered her right fist ( the one with the weapon on it ) like a piston repeatedly into Teri's exposed lower back area. The intense pain brought Teri back to her senses but she could do nothing to prevent Elizabeth sliding down her back, hooking her legs and wrenching back in a high angle Boston crab manoeuvre. The taller Mistress had all sorts of leverage advantage and she hauled back on Teri's legs with all her might until Teri's body was bent almost in a U shape.

Demi got to her knees to enjoy the view of Teri's face contorted in agony, tears streaming from her eyes and asked her if she quit.

"Yes. I quit! I submit! I submit!", she screamed into the microphone.

Teri lay there writhing in agony as Demi lifted Elizabeth's hand in victory and reminded the audience of the stipulations of the fight. She also took the opportunity to slip the knuckle duster off Elizabeth's hand and hide it away again. Elizabeth swiftly slipped on a pair of black leather shorts, a chest hugging top and her favourite pair of thigh high boots and stood over her newly won submissive. It was with great pleasure that she attached a set of manacles to Teri's ankles and cuffed her wrists in front of her and then best of all slipped a leather collar around her rival Mistress, a silver ring hanging from it ready to accept a leash.

Stood in the centre of the ring Elizabeth addressed Teri," Slave, get on your knees and lick the soles of my boots to show your obedience".

Despite her pain and embarrassment Teri was not going to give in just yet and snarled at Elizabeth and told her to "fuck off!"

Elizabeth just smiled and ordered her other slaves to drape Teri's body over the ropes so that she was held in place and to fetch her riding crop. Her tied arms were hung over the top of the top rope and a guy held them from the floor, while another reached in and kept her feet still. A look of pure elation passed over Elizabeth as she played the crop gently over Teri's face, showing her the instrument then bringing it down with maximum force on Teri's exposed backside. She screamed , as she did for each of the twenty five similar blows administered mercilessly.

Elizabeth halted the assault and signalled her slave to release the weeping Teri and she sunk to her knees, her fat ass a mess of raw, red lines. This time when Mistress Elizabeth commanded her to lick her soles, Teri obediently dipped her head and humiliatingly began to tongue the boots of her hated rival Mistress.

Wanting to waste no time before breaking in her new 'pet', Mistress Elizabeth was soon leading a very subdued Teri out of the club on her knees by a dog leash in front of everybody.

Exactly one week later Mistress Elizabeth came into the club to much fanfare. Again, there was a huge attendance, everyone eager to see what had happened to Mistress Teri. Elizabeth had taken over Teri's subs as well and been extra harsh on them so she was followed into the hall by a harem of pathetic worshippers. But no-one noticed them. All eyes were on the figure dressed head-to-toe in black rubber, a full rubber mask over her face and two nostril straws the only protrusions.

Mistress Demi had gleefully arranged a stage for this final humiliation to occur on and the procession made their way up onto it and came to a stop. Once settled Elizabeth slowly removed the rubber suit and let the audience what had become of the once tough dominatrix.

The first thing noticed was that she stood stock still; her head bowed and obeyed every command her Mistress gave. She was not shackled but had obviously been broken by Elizabeth into obedience. More immediate was the fact that Teri's head had been shaved bald, not just shaved but polished into a smooth skin dome which the lights reflected off. The audience giggled nervously on seeing this for the first time.

More ominous was a large tattoo that took up most of Teri's back which read " I AM MISTRESS ELIZABETH'S BITCH", it was in thick dark letters and had taken sometime for the tattoo artist to complete. Taking less time was the smaller tattoo on her left cheek which was just two words "CUM SLUT". Teri stood there head bowed before all her fellow Mistress's as Mistress Elizabeth pointed all this out with some relish. Mistress Elizabeth pointed out that she had had Teri's nipples pierced and two large metal rings put through them. She played with the rings for a second while Teri let her, then Elizabeth snapped on two heavy hanging weights to the rings and ordered her slave to stay standing straight causing a big strain to her breasts.

Finally Elizabeth brought out Hilary onto the stage; she was naked except for an obscenely large strap on dildo and Elizabeth took pleasure in instructing her slave to fuck the hell out of her former Mistress in both her holes as the crowd watched.

That night as everyone filed out of the club the Mistress's could only speculate what Elizabeth had done to Teri to have such power over her and could only wonder how Teri would fit back into the club now that the week was over.